Yesterday, i go to the park with my friend Mia we play soccer for a while and then eat ice cream from a small shop near by. the weather was really hot so we sits under a tree to cool down. Mia say, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
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Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia. We played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia said, “I wish we could come here every day!”
Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia. We play soccer for a while and the eat ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot, so we sit under a tree to cool down. Mia said, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
Yesterday I went to the park with my friend Mia. We played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. It was really hot outside so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia says “I wish we could come here everyday!”
Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia we played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia said, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
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Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia, we played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot, so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia says, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
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Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia we played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia say, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
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Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia we played soccer for a while and then we ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot, so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia says, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
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Yesterday, i went to the park with my friend Mia we played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. the weather was really hot so we sat down under a tree to cool down. Mia says, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
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Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia We played soccer for a while and then we ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia says, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
Yesterday, i gone to the park with my friend Mia we played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia said, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia, we played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia says, “I wish we could come here everyday!”
Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia. We played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia said, “I wish we could come here every day!”
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Yesterday, I went to the park with my friend Mia. We played soccer for a while and then ate ice cream from a small shop nearby. The weather was really hot so we sat under a tree to cool down. Mia said, “I wish we could come here everyday!”